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Life at Forty-Two

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She ran through the rain
With girlish delight
She feels no pain
She feels no fright

With the excitement of a little child
She opened her treasure
She laughed and she smiled
At each new pleasure

She called me on the phone
Just to say thank you
I heard the joy in her tone
So I listened like a fool

She exploded into my world
With the brilliance of  a star
My security became unfurled
Life was no longer held in a jar

She taught me to run in rain
That life is a treasure
No matter how difficult the pain
There can always be joy and pleasure

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A dear friend of mine turns forty-two on Aug 31. We celebrated her birthday this past Saturday
Written August 30th, 2006

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 31, 2006
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    excellent~

    Oh Bob
    This is so beautiful and sweet...
    I am glad she had a friend like you to help her celebrate
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • melphleg gold member
    August 30, 2006
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    Yes, I did mean "Life" but "Lift" works too.

  • JohnWaynePalsy
    August 30, 2006
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    childish

    thats great and lovely stuff you got going there.so simple and perfect.what more can one ask for?i love it

  • Firequeen
    August 30, 2006
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    what a wonderful uplifting write
    so sweet
    Happy birthday to your friend and what a wonderful way for you to celebrate with her.
    Keep up the great writting
    Firequeen

  • FlawedDestiny
    August 30, 2006
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    This is such a sweet poem. I love how the child renewed life! It was really beautiful to read. I just have one question: in your title did you mean Life at Forty-Two rather than Lift at Forty-Two?
    Great job on this. I love the picture too. So cute!
    ~*destiny*~
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