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Winds of Time

Sifting through the dandelions of the past-
Memories parachuting, down- slowly,
Forget- me- nots, the bloom of my day.

The scent of the years drifting through me,
Is a rose, just a rose, or more?
Blossoms shrouded in caring.

As the petals fall, one by one;
Sweet magnolia's in my mind.
Fragrance blowing to me-

On the winds of time.


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Written April 17th, 2003

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  • Redstormy gold member
    April 25, 2003
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    Oh man this is simply beautiful!!

    As the petals fall, one by one;
    Sweet magnolia's in my mind.
    Fragrance blowing to me-

    Powerful with so few words...this is a gem

    Red

  • Kalexi
    April 17, 2003
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    This is an amazing write Especially love the last stanza

    Karen