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Storm

Dark bruises streak the pale sky
Shadows dance in a melancholy downpour
Lights quiver through an opaque rain
Waves crash upon a sea drenched shore

Laughter is drowned out by the rain
Time becomes bees, stinging at any pause
Silver drops shudder as they soak
Drawing out every person's flaws

Rays of brightness come reaching out
Driving away the opaque rain
Bringing back hope and laughter
Beckoning away the dark soil stains


Author notes

Got a long way to go...but this just popped into my head and I thought I had better write it down before it popped back out!
Written September 2nd, 2006

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  • Black Panic
    September 4, 2006
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    Nothing else to say but that was beautiful Meelz...
    -M xo
  • Black Mamba
    September 3, 2006
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    xD nice i likey already.