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Written September 2nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- What's up? by zexzgal.
350 points, ended September 24, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sorrows Edge
I feel I feel......un bitter is the heart expressing something deeply etched inside them......somber thoughts forever linger.....even as time moves on.....the heart is left limber as though it stopped beating....Even so.......it must beat to thrive.....these be my thoughts to this lovely expressed soul......beautiful
Mal
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Malabu thanks you very much for you wonderful comment and applause. You express sorrow so beautifully.
~carol
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Thank you Lia for your wonderful comments it is much appreciated,and thanks for allowing me to enter your contest.
~much love~
~carol -
Wow, this was simply beautiful, the imagery, everything. Your words were so poetic and I loved it. Great write. Thanks for entering my contest.
~Lia -
Thanks Kimberly, for the comments and applause it is much appreciated. A big
back to you.
carol
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This is beautiful and heart wrenching, Carol. I just want to give you a big bear !!
Beautiful.
Kimberly G. -
Polly, Thanks so very much for reading and for your heartening comments and applause it is genuinely appreciated.
~much love~
carol
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Thank you Linda, The beautiful comments and the applause you left are deeply appreciated.
~much love~
carol
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Thank you Kari, I appreciate your lovely comments.
~much love~
carol
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Thank you Terri, your wonderful comments are greatly appreciated.
~much love~
carol
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This is just beautiful Carol. You have opened your heart and let us in. I definitely understand the title that you came up with. The unbound emotions are very evident as you read the poem. You have done a fantastic job on this one.
Polly
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Beautiful write Carol
Each line holds so much meaning and feel that
several can stand alone and still convey a deep
and meaninful message to all. Well penned!!
Much Love
Linda
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DEEP!
Wow Auntie...you've done WONDERFUL...thanks so much for sharing this with us I loved it...
Kari -
Carol this is SO AMAZING!!!
Beautiful words, beautiful emotions.......
Again, AMAZING!
Love,
Terri.
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