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A Swan

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(We dream the dreams)



Poetry;
an
illusive swan
writers dream you
reflecting in glimpses of the soul
floating upon glittering's
of inspirational sighs
heartfelt,
breathtaking
bathed in tears of aspirations.

It guides poetic knights
through sleepy-eyed worlds
enlightens slumber
from its snowy silence.
weaving dreams
upon twilight skies
hazy swirls
take on
mystical form.

{Hints, of a ghostly figure}

Neck arches

Feathers ruffle

Upon a mirrored pool
drifts
a swan

It whispers; longings,
in soft melodies
meandering freely
upon rhymes musical winds.
Our heart's captivated, in total awe
as fractured thoughts,
unfold
feathery verse,
upon
feathery verse.
like tiny footprints,
stepping
one... by ... one,
each letter extending,
eloquently
surpassing the last.

Embossed wings, unfurl
in strumming harmony
stretching out tautly
for artistic skies
and with one final burst,
effortlessly

"Arise my thoughts"

into breathless
flight.



We dream the dreams...
each and every word, a swan....


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Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Beautiful poem, on of the most beautiful I've seen in a long time. Loved it, the imagery the detail the background, everything. well done!

    -GL in contest

  • Sharcu silver member
    September 6, 2006
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    You have definately caught me off gaurd with your amazing words within your poem and the overall flow of it. Wonderful writing! Thanks for entering
    --Tim