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When a Mother's Child Dies

 

Who will ease

the suffering

when

a mother's heart cries

What will free

the deepest pain

when

her mournful soul sighs

Who will sing

the joyful tune

when

the silence is so strong

What will make

it all right

when

everything's all wrong


Who will carry

him back to her

when

he's desperate to be found

What will light up

the new day

when

it's dark all around

Who will wipe

away the tears

from

a woeful mother's eyes

Love will keep

faith and hope alive 

when

a mother's child dies





Author notes

Option 3

pain
suffering
love
desperate
dark
light

Written October 15th, 2006

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  • mzblondemoments
    October 16, 2006
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    Thank you angel of darkness for your lovely comments and for hosting such an inspiring contest.

    ~carol

  • princess of death
    October 16, 2006
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    very good i love it i love how u wrote it and everything about it

    good luck in my contest
    ~Angel of darkness~
    (alexandra or a.k.a alex)

  • mzblondemoments
    October 16, 2006
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    Thank you Kimberly

    ~carol

  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    October 15, 2006
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    Absolutely beautiful, Carol!



    Kimberly G.