Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Oh Angsty Angsty Death

Oh here we are
Strapped to the chairs
being forced to hold one another
As much as I want it I feel as if you don't

Oh FUCK
Oh FUCK

I hear the bells a-ringin'
If they find oh GOD if they find
You'll be the one punished

Oh FUCK~
I scream this to you
You're not listening
Why?
Why?

Are you ready to die?

Oh stab
Oh bleed
Oh fuck
I believe
This is the end
For good ol' you and me

I guess maybe you do want it
Oh stab Oh bleed
Oh tear the flesh in front of me
Watch me cry
Watch me die
Watch bleed
Watch my eyes stare straight at thee...

Author notes

yeah...I'm in a bit of an angsty mood I guess...it makes me giggle since I use 'fuck' so much...so much for maturity
Written October 23rd, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Wondering Why
    December 3, 2006

    Edit | Reply

    loved it

    Wow, Al.

    Yep, you did use "Fuck" a lot. haha.

    You definately seemed pissed off at someone & I can feel it in this write.

    Nice job, deary!

    ~Mishy


  • sinisterkitten
    October 23, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i like this poem, theirs something about it...idk. Awesome poem.