Angels
Hand in hand fly
Giving and sharing love
Silently falling from above
Holy bubbles effervescently blown
From Most High's angelic blessings
Smiles shine through teardropped veils
Once hearts surmise
angels
Author notes
A rictameter is a nine lined stanza with a syllable count of 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2 beginning and ending with the same two syllables.
Written November 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Cityscape - Los Angeles by Highwaytraveller.
375 points, ended September 3, 14 entries
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Very nicely done Rictameter. I like it, it adapts well to this contest prompt. best of luck to you... Scott
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Wow...you have really penned this well..I'm impressed by the rictameter...
yes, L.A certainly does make you believe there's angels hanging about, doesn't it?
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Good luck!
This was a very unique poem. The best of luck to you in the contest. I'll comment more afterwards.
Kari -
You evoke lightness and joy with your image of holy soap bubbles, and you sustain the metaphor with gently blown blessings from the Most High. Lovely images and form, Sea!
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Isn't it amazing MOM how bubbles can give the the feeling of love between Angels.This is beautifull Mom and good luck in the contest.
HALEIGH xoxoxoxoxo
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