Doves cry too ,
angels catch their tears in spread wings,
as heavens gates open to take you in,
innocents,incomplete,
as our hearts cry for the life taken so quick,
memories burnt deep of your smile and eyes of blue ,
tears will fall as god calls you home ,one last time ,
no more pain,no more sorrow,
purity in love ,life and death,
pure of soul ,
our tears shall fall forever more of stolen days and nights that had not begun,
sleep well our love,our child,we will never forget the laughter in your voice ,
the smile,the tears we cried together,
our thoughts will be with you onyour journey to a life of no pain,
our hearts are one as you rest in peace.
Author notes
The euology i wrote was for a child today upset me a bit .......but his mum said he is going,
to a better place and for me not to feel sad.
Written November 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything... Make it move me... by Amanda21.
555 points, ended November 11, 2006, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Heartrendering
This was a very deep poem. I could feel the tone of sadness, and yet a somewhat peacefulness to it. You have penned an excellent piece here, poet
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Wow, children passing are a hard thing to cope with. I don’t know what more to say. I really hope you are Okay through this and you have people there by your side for comfort.
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
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Hi, I found myself drawn back here again, to once again read this beautiful piece, I think it's my 4th time....everytime I read it, I have the same heartbreaking reaction to your words...this doesn't happen often, ususally when I've read something more than once it loses 'something' this gains strength with every read, I will try to applaud again, if it lets me
Cathy -
This is beautiful, it bought tears to my eyes before I'd read your author's notes, then I cried...what a beautiful soul you have, I am so glad I took up the 'aussie parlour challange' and came to read you
Cathy -
This is a beautiful poem, one that is very enjoyable to read.
God Bless
LisaMarie
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