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1-A brief introduction to our scenario and the town in which it took place

What is it about mankind, humanity, man and woman, which, every now and then, finds us overreacting to the tiniest, most innocent circumstance?  
Is it because that one little harmless incident resembles the slightest shade of the actions that we partake in, but only on a hush-hush, secret basis?  The dark deeds, all the lubricants and silenced screams included, that we dare not even confess to Christ at his vengeful hand; the orgies, coke parties, sexual harassment sprees.
There can really be no other explanation.  When someone echoes our joyous depravity, even in the slightest, barely noticeable way we take it personally, as if that person, unbeknownst even to them, is saying “I know everything about you, every little secret, all the anal sex, all the cum and blood stains and you can’t hide them, no matter how hard you try, and you’re a horrid, loathsome, despicable pile of human filth.”
Another trait of the human race is seeing far, far, far too much into some of the simple things in life.  Like, say, the naivety of a small boy, curious about those things he’s surrounded by on a daily basis, who are somewhat like him, but with slight alterations; longer hair, higher voices, a varying style of clothing, even some of the food they eat seems like it came from another planet.  
Young girls, to most young boys, are more interesting than any dinosaur or ninja, they just don’t know it.  
It’s an unspoken enigma, the interaction between a boy, in this case no older than 7, the girl the same age, we cannot comprehend why they do some of the things they do, some of the things they say, some of the thoughts that pop into their seemingly simple minds.
Little knows man.
The town, which shall remain nameless, to “protect” those involved, although the ones who need protection are either dead and/or have decided to go the way of Thoreau and live in the woods in a hand made shack, is, like the vast majority of every small town in these beloved states the epitome of conservative.
They shudder when the sun sets, when it rains no one goes outside for fear of getting sick from the even lukewarm rain, because illness demands some sort of medical attention, and when medical attention is needed money is used, and when money is used, look out Mary, people become slightly poorer, be it even by a few hundred dollars.
So, it’s safe to say, I suppose, as absolutely absurd as this tale, all entirely true, will seem, it’s not thoroughly shocking that when the actions that set forth the story that follows took place the town, basically, went, every last one of them, completely ape shit.

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the first chapter in a short story i'm working on.
Written November 15th, 2006

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