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Lèvres crèmes d'indigo

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Lèvres crèmes d'indigo

Taunting moonlight kisses her neck with indigo cream lips
As strong fondling fingers of moon beams clutch at her hips

Waiting in awe by the lake watching and longing for more
As the moon slowly pulls back her covering to the shore

Moon beams tenderly massage breastworks by the rocks
Reaching silently...slowly tugging off ....her moonlit socks

Moonlight lips sinking slowly into the navel of her desire
Round and round the lips gently proceed igniting a fire

The moon then marvels of tempting, creamy, lascivious thighs
Moon beams caressing them emitting most tender of sighhhs

Morning approaches as the moon prepares for its daily rest
For its glittering beams snuggle deep and cozy - in her nest

Once more watching
                                  the
                                          moon taunt
                                                      with Lips of Indigo Cream


....Pour l'amour de la lune.....Et ses lèvres de crème d'indigo

JD

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  • lencio-sunchild gold member
    November 3

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    Coincidence or whatever about the indigo lips! but this one is amazing and tastefully sensual. You know I did one a few days ago, felt a little uneasy after I wrote it and then the comments just kept pouring in, so I left it there. Had to explain it to my friend that writing (like that) is only an art!!! lol!

    Great stuff! this!

    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • Ashleigh London
    March 11

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    Congrats on the silver and honorable mention trophies. I rest my case about wanting more with each poem of yours. This just added to that feeling... you are truly gifted... you have each word perfectly placed, I especially enjoyed the bi-lingual bit.

  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    The ending is quite brilliantly constructed...

    I think it adds a lot to the piece.

    I agree with Blue - exquisite is the one perfect word to sum this poem up.

    I find your poetry rather addictive.


  • Blue Rew gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    This is just exquisite! The moon and sea together build an endless sensuality. I love the foreign language...it adds so much to the soft, tender element here. Glad I didn't miss this one, adding it to my list! Blue


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    Now that is a very sensual poem and I loved it. you did great here my friend.


  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    I can't imagine Poe ever writing something like this as Platinum Stiches seems to think....but maybe she saw something that I did not. But I did enjoy the romantic/sensual/sur-real feel to this. It was the title that drew me to it....and I loved the closing line. Oh le francais, c'est vraiment la langue d'amourEt la lune de temps a temps est comme une femme [romantique] I am assuming you do speak French. I used to be so fluent in it....until I moved to the US and unfortunately there is so little opportunity to speak it and after awhile one gets rusty......


    P.S I am glad you care so much about Jess....a couple of years ago she confided some things to me...I then very discretely used my connections to make sure that SS in UK was made aware. I believe she was removed from her abusive father and went to live with an aunt, [where she seemed to like it] If she overcomes this eating disorder she has the whole world at her fingertips....she is talented and ohhhhhh sooooooo intelligent and mature for someone her tender age. Thanks again,

    reenie


  • Platinum Stitches
    May 18, 2007

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    put your name in the author's notes or you will be DQed [you have two days to do this, starting now]

    I think if Poe were to write an erotic poem, it would be like this. It had beautiful descriptions and I love who you used the moonlight as the spotlight that reflected this unfolding event. It was beautiful.


  • Tatianna Valcor
    March 31, 2007

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    Wow, this is really good! Your stuff usually is though. Thank you for sharing this with me! I loved what you came up with to match this picture. Keep it flowing!

    Always,
    Summer


  • Allan Emery silver member
    February 24, 2007

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    If I was a woman, or gay, I would have glowing things to say about this. Since I am a man I don't like it so well and wish I had written it. Nuff said. Three bunnies to steal your ideas so I can write them first.


  • Amera gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    “For the love of the moon” this is lovely sensual and alluring. I believe it is true art and it expresses the emotions that are exchanged between two people eloquently. Je n'ai pas su que vous avez parle francais.
    I speak nine languages, what other’s do you speak?

    Love, Amera


    • JohnnyD gold member
      February 24, 2007
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      "For the love of the Moon" Luna, as in DKakalunaticserene,
      although I fully suspect you already figured that out, as did she.

      I had several years of latin 30 some years ago, a year of French in oh, 1974 I believe, and Spanish from Immersion with three latino Girfriends way back in the 70s and early 80s. But alas, disuse for ages has certainly not made me any more fluent in any of them. let's see, you say you did not know I spoke French? neither did I anymore,LOL! I suspect my syntax is a sin and I must look up many words anymore. Perhaps the best answer to your question would be;
      Amera, je crains que je ne parle pas le français mais plutot, helas, le marmonnement et ne l'envoie pas a la boucherie !
      And that was perhaps what, six minutes of effort and four respellings? LOL!

      The latin still comes in handy when I run across a word I am not familiar with.

      the French was useful as pickup lines back in the 70s, and the Spanish the same back in the 70s and 80s. Oh, and some snippets of Vietnamese, but not ones I wish to relate in honorable company.

      To tell you anything different would be a lie. Which languages do you speak and how many of them are you fluent in.


      JD

  • Zayra Yves gold member
    February 19, 2007
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    Congratulations on the Silver


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    February 10, 2007

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    I've read this before without commenting...

    Peace

    The beauty he increases
    more because of you
    you spirit words releases
    integrity which is true

    Peace

    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    PS: I commenting on everyone here equally


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 10, 2007
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    OHHHHH SOOKIE...

    This is too incredibly hot...the second time around even...

    WOW....

  • Sacrificial Love
    February 2, 2007

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    OH My....

    this is INCREDIBLE....


    so extremely erotic...

    I want to write like this...I truly do....

    beautifully penned with passion.


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 12, 2007
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  • Angel With No Halo
    January 4, 2007
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    Pretty

    I could imagine my own self there... I love it. This has amazing immagery. I love how you put the french twist at the end.. vey very beautiful ambiance this posesses. Thank you for sharing this with us.. good luck in the contest!!
    ~Krys~


  • Heavenly Angel
    December 31, 2006

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    Most beautifully done and so tastefully sensual! I love this! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! Love it!

  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    December 31, 2006
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    Gorgous!

    Lovely, lovely lovely....I just love the way that sounds "pour l'amour de la lune" scrumptious! This creates strange flutterings in my lower abdomine...there's butterflies in there I think. mmmm ooo ahhhh! says it best I think!
    xxoo
  • evil felinez
    December 30, 2006
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    absoluterly love it!!

    That was amazing!!!


  • LatisheCalasouvve
    December 16, 2006

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    Oh sigh* What a marvelous creation.

    "Taunting moonlight kisses her neck with indigo cream lips
    As strong fondling fingers of moon beams clutch at her hips"

    The very first lines, my favorite. They bade me read more and have thy fill. Unfortunately I am not full. I crave more. Which, is good. =)

    Lady Blue~


  • Melodies silver member
    December 6, 2006
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    A surprise!

    OH MY!

  • Iohagh
    November 21, 2006

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    Go on Daddy get your grove on...

    Darling Daddy

    Your heart deserves embrace
    arms entwined from behind
    kisses upon your face
    love ever so kind.

    Smoosh

    Janet


  • blueyez
    November 21, 2006

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    beautiful sensual

    This is an awesome write full of sensuality and hopes for me. I find hope in love and bliss in this write! I really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your lovely works!


  • Rented Emotion
    November 20, 2006

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    Lovely Erotic Write

    You are right this is right up my alley. The expression that you take entirely to a new level. I've never been so turned on by the moon in my life. Beautiful imagery just completely dominates this poem. The french is yet another wonderful cherry to be popped. Love the romance created here.


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    November 17, 2006

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    Ummmmmmmm. I feel this so strongly right in the base of my abdomine. Just above my pubic bone. Je Suis enchanté mon amour.


  • Dusty Rose
    November 17, 2006

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    Goodness

    This is so beautiful johnnyD.

    It's also very sensual..You just went above and beyond with this one..just awesome..I love it!!

    much love
    Dusty

  • Jade Darklinmoon
    November 17, 2006
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    Bravicimo

  • Jade Darklinmoon
    November 17, 2006
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    this is the most beautiful dedication to Lady Luna that i think I have ever seen. Gracious, and loving. Bravicimo pa pa

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    November 17, 2006
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    beautiful


  • SarahD
    November 17, 2006
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    WOW!

    This was a wonderful poem and yes, it is different from your usual style, but you have really written a well expressed and described poem here...I loved it! Nice one daddyo! *Blissful Princess*

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