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Melodies of the hearts

 

 

 

 

 

Hypnotized in passion’s symphony

  as captivating sensations

 play a seductive prelude 

 

Suspended in a endless waltz

in that uninhibited moment in time 

Two spirits swept away in a nocturne

  

Melodies of the hearts tango in harmony 

The fantasia drawing us closer

 as souls entwine in the dance 


Pirouetting to romance of the crescendo 

without a word spoken… 

love defined

  

 

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mzblondemoments
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  • -Ink Artist-
    December 13, 2006

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    Gorgeous!

    Carol, this is a stunning piece of poetry! You've captured a lovers dance in the most breathtaking way! Your lines just bled seduction and arousal! Truly a gorgeous, magnificent write, Sis! Congrats on the HM!

    Hope you are well! Happy Holidays!!

    ~Lori


    • mzblondemoments
      December 17, 2006
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      ThaNK Sis, for your fantastic comments and applause as always they are very much appreciated.
      I hope you are well also!!! Wishing you the best this Holiday season.

      ~carol

  • Pollycheck silver member
    December 3, 2006

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    Great Job

    What a wonderful love poem. I normally do not care for love poems because they are so corny and over written, but I really like this one. I especially like the following lines:

    Pirouetting to romance of the crescendo
    without a word spoken…
    love defined

    I agree, when you are with your true love, no words need to be spoken.

    Polly

    • mzblondemoments
      December 3, 2006
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      Thank you Polly, Love poems are not my forte so I have to indulge in the metaphors. That is true no words need often be spoken when you're in love. Thanks again Polly.


      ~carol

  • Lionslove silver member
    December 1, 2006

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    All we can say is, Tim was VERY torn between all the finalists - the final decision was left up to us! (Thank God, he insisted we remain anonymous!)

    Please refer to the contest page final comments for criteria and final notes.

    He will be creating a new contest page today. Initially, in our final notes, we said the top winners and the hm's would be reserved for the final round...which you are, no matter what. But, Tim had a change of mind and felt that you should also receive a personal invite to the next round as well. (An insider for all those who placed: the next round is "Erotica" - he is allowing pre-writes for the first half of the contest and the last half reserved for new writes, as he had so many requests for new writes before.

    You will be sent an im once the contest page is up later today.

    Again...CONGRATULATIONS ON A MOST EXCELLENT WRITE!!!

    Lionslove and The Judges

  • Lionslove silver member
    November 28, 2006
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    This is an excellent piece. The contest auto-closed when the entried filled up. We hadn't planned on starting to START to judge until Friday, Dec. 1st....so, be patient.

    Thanks again for your entry.

    .............Lionslove and judges.


  • LAPoe silver member
    November 28, 2006

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    Stunning

    You waltzed in with your words and left a dance upon
    my heart... you've captured the dance of passion
    in poem, What an artistic achievement, stunning!!
    If I were to dance the dance of passion, unfortunately
    it would be the ol'soft-shoe' danced to the tune of
    "all I want for christmas is my back not to ache"
    A Christmas classic in my home. laurie.


    • mzblondemoments
      November 28, 2006
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      Thank you LAPoe, I appreciate your comments and applause very much. I could also get in on your tune "all I want for christmas is my back not to ache" I think it's going to be a new christmas tradition around here.

      ~carol

  • Pollycheck silver member
    November 25, 2006
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    Outstanding

    This is an amazing write. The images are so vivid and they paint a beautiful picture in my mind as I read through this poem.


    • mzblondemoments
      November 27, 2006
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      Thank you Polly , I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Your comments and applause are very much appreciated.
      ~carol

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    November 25, 2006

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    Beautiful

    You are one amazing writer Carol. A masterpiece you have written that lured me to read and read several times. Green with envy...best of luck in this contest sweetie
    Linda


    • mzblondemoments
      November 27, 2006
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      Thank you Linda your wonderful comments and applause are both greatly appreciated.
      ~carol
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