Last night i had a dream,
I was walking through a city,
And came accross an enormous building,
A Library, I was told.
Beautiful. Antique. Magnificent.
Brimming from floor to roof with books,
Science fiction, non-fiction, fiction,
History, historical fiction, old classics,
New thrillers, detective, encyclopaedia, thesoreus,
It was,
my friend,
a beatiful dream.
Hope you like it, love to hear your thoughts.
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Sounds like a great dream to me - but I did not se any poetry books in your library -check spelling of a few of the words in line 9. Just wondering too about the small i - and why the library line was indented? Curious about that. Liked the style used here and idea behind it.
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Thankyou very much for your great help! Fixed the spelling n lil 'i'... the library line was indented... coz it was...
Cant really explain it, i guess its my way of putting a pause, but like a pretend pause in it, without new line or comma.
Does that make sence?
thanks heaps for ur help,
rah
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Very Good
Hi daughter, I really loved this little piece. The imagery was very good. I too love libraries, they are so magestic and full of history. Very Good! Love, Dad
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that was different!
that was different... not a bad thing though... this was simple and calming at the same time. Loved the detail you put into it
Ampd
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thanks for the comment and clappy things. (
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thankyou, Im glad you liked it.
lotsa luv,
ur lil sis,
rah
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Different
This was great because it is not a subject I see or read often. I love the style employed and I am glad I could visit your writing. I could see the library and since I love all places where there are masses of the written word, this meant something to me. It was well written and I think the conversation style worked well for you. -
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Thankyou for such a kind comment, im so glad it meant something to you, as it does me... i guess it sounds so silly, but i really love library's, especially old or antique ones... like the one in my dream.
thanks
rah
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