Current Status: Abandoned.
I'm only posting it because... I wrote it and I don't like to throw away things.
It’s in the black of night.
The moon is shining, but no other light.
I’m breathing.
Slow and steady as I begin dreaming.
[Gasp]
My heart begins racing at the speed of sound
Gripping to the bed, blankets falling to the ground
I let out a scream, “GOD MAKE THIS GO AWAY”
“I’LL DO ANYTHING AT ALL, JUST MAKE IT GO AWAY!”
But I can see it; it’s more realistic in this dream
As the walls close in, I continued to scream
I beat my hands and feet into the now blanketless bed
I wake up with full realization of what I was doing …. it was all in my head.
Sitting on my bed, covered in nearly frozen sweat
I shiver. I cringe at this reoccurring hell
Author notes
I decided to abort this.. as I didn't like it.. but I posted it anyways.
Eh.. I don't plan on finishing it... so.. what do you think anyway?
Comments
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i lke it even though its not finished....i think it could end that way. but yeah i liked it a lot my heart was literally pounding!
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Good so far. Hope you end up completing it, I'd love to read the finished product. and if that's it...it's still good as is. That was so vivid, thank goodness we can always wake up.
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