Funny and caring to everyone she meets,
Rhyme master whose poetry is sweet,
Outstanding teen with so much to be proud of,
Driven and dedicated to the work she does.
Ongoing drive to be the best she can be,
Fine young lady as you all can see.
A true poet who writes with passion and truth,
Never giving in to the battles of her youth.
Author notes
Female, to frodofan, one of my best friends on this site, option: Acrostic
A contest entry
- BATTLE OF THE SEXES - ROUND 4 - Write a tribute to one of your AP favourites (PREWRITES NOW ALLOWED) by SarahD.
410 points, ended December 1, 2006, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HOOD WINKED!!!
what a wonderful tribute to whom i'm sure is well deserving! thank you for sharing this lovely acrostic. keep writing! God bless you always


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nice job
Frodofan is a great poetess and you have done a terrific job of letting that show in your poem
I like her poem too as well as yours
[I think this would look better if it was aligned to the left but then you may not be able to see the text because of the flowers...it looks pretty good the way it is
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Oh this is lovely so sweet I always love the writes from one poet to the next they so capture a true side of the poet due to most of them relate to our writings this is beautiful... I got this poem from her page she being Hood-Winked by the the Poetic Bandits would you let her know I've been here
Thanks I'll have to come back to your page and read another one of your writes.


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I'm sure Ida loved it.
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WOW
I just logged on and saw your message, ready to read your newest piece. I was so surprised. This is so sweet! I've gotten so many insults. lol. An X-friend actually wrote an insulting poem about me on here.
But this is so so so nice. Thank you Angel! You are so sweet and I'm really happy to call you a friend.
I don't even know what to say, just that I'm truly honored!


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Lovely!
this was a lovely and thoughtful acrostic poem that was heart warming and I'm sure it will be appreciated!
Personally I prefer acrostics to be laid out differently like so:
Funny and caring to everyone she meets,
Rhyme master whose poetry is sweet,
Outstanding teen with so much to be proud of,
Driven and dedicated to the work she does.
Ongoing drive to be the best she can be,
etc etc, but that is just my personal prefernce and in no way compulsory, I just find it easier to see that it's acrostic.
I thought you expressed yourself well in this poem!
You thoroughly explained why this person is a friend/favourite here at AP and that's what we asked for!
Thanks for entering and good luck too!
Blissful Princess

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