I lower you to the bed, reaching for your thighs
Smelling the erotic smell that lingers off of you
Intensly you begin to shake, making me extremely wet
Your signals telling me to go ahead and persue
As I nibble your nipples, your head flees back
Tingling your nips with my loving tongue
Wrapping my loving body around your hips
You tickle my fancy, keeping me young
You tilt your had back, as though your in orbit
I take out my knife and run it smoothly down your chest
Running the blade in the most sensitve of spots
Studying your every movement as if you were a quest
Slowly I deepen my knife to your thigh
Making you squirm with anticipation
Running the knife smoothly up to your member
Keeping you gagged and deep with frustration
Your blood begins to drip down to the head
I lick every inch as though it were my only meal
Feeding off of your horrible soul
Then taking your life, in which a steal
Looking up to the heavens above
Remembering what I had just done
I lick my knife and remember your taste
In this case, I've just won
You have become my first victim ... the devious seductions must persue
Yummy! A Bloody Mess!
© Chantelle Tessmer, All rights reserved
A contest entry
- Macabre Medicines! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended August 24, 52 entries
Honorable winner
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oooh this is different and i like this alot, boy oh boy how am i going to judge this contest... this is amazing hun, so seductive and bondage like mm i love
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yeah you did great with this write, and you should be proud of it, i love it for sure,
all my love, best of luck in the contest,
kitty xxx -
Bloody mess sublime
this poem has wonderfully written erotic and dark imagery which excites the imagination of the reader with such difinitive flow I see where she got all her loving darkness brought out,,,,,blessings of lve,light,life....Fire Storm
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yup. not a ramble. interesting. captivating. I like it, and I hope you continue on with this. deli-shus.
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You tilt your had back, as though your in orbit
I take out my knife and run it smoothly down your chest
Running the blade in the most sensitve of spots
i got there and i was drippping......OHHHH so suductive. you should see wut sparky is doin in my works so far..ha ha WOW....ur so demonic leaving him tied up and cutting him there HA HA
love it love you
mensch!
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wtf somebody help me i am the sex toy of a sex crazed serial killer HELP ME!!!!
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