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Beauty, mine and yours.

Beauty, mine.
Beauty for me is clear skin, good posture.
An almost smile,
(sometimes i dont like my big teethy one... )
Dangly earings.
Jewlery.
A fun hairdo.
awesome shoes.
and... wearing clothes that i love.

Beauty, yours.
A Smile.
Maybe shining eyes.
A warm greeting and heartfelt conversation.
Thats all.
                      .... oh. good posture helps...

I've met some people, 'gorgeous' that i dont see as that.
And some 'plain' that i see as the most beautiful people in the world.
Theres no such thing as 'plain', or skin deep beauty.

Beauty, mine and yours.
A different standard.
Funny how one see's oneself...

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I hope you like it. I like the concept, a different bar to reach.

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  • RevHead
    January 3, 2007

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    that was inspiring. That is definately one to promote. I love how you put beauty into simple words I'd say you have raised the standard with this. Awesome stuff!!!


  • rochelley
    December 27, 2006

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    yes. i totally agree. it IS funny how one see's oneself. deffinetely. very nice...i liked it a lot. keep it up. :-D

  • Confusicus
    December 21, 2006
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    jewellery or jewelry, not jewlery. I know its minor but it was a rule.

  • Confusicus
    December 19, 2006

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    I asked for spelling to be checked, that is a pet hate of mine. Anyway good write next time watch the spelling.


    • runandhide
      December 21, 2006
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      thanks, but i checked the spelling a few times, if you could tell me what it was you had a problem with that would be greatly appreciated.
      rah

  • FAH faithandhope
    December 9, 2006
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    Thoughtful

    I like the way you make the point that true beauty is what's on the inside. Beautiful people can be pretty ugly if they are not kind and the not so beautiful can become very attractive because of their kindness.
    Good job! Luv ya, Dad FAH


  • joshuap
    December 6, 2006

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    Well,I guess this does describe the word "beauty"

    God Bless You
    Josh

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