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For One Moment

I've only seen you for a moment
But a second was all I needed
One momentary look in your eyes
To me.. You are beautiful

We talk.. Just for a moment
I get hooked on your voice
Hooked on your looks
I am hooked on you..

For that very moment
There is only you and me
Nothing surrounds us..
Nobody around.. Just us

I imagine that just for one moment
One second.. You feel the same

Author notes

I have never attempted a love poem, but recently I got some insperation. I know this is only a crappy little attempt but ah well..

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  • Black Panic
    December 7, 2006
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    Well this is much better than any love poem I could ever write! I like to see a new topic in your poetry and I'm glad you found such inspiration

    -Mon

  • Romeos captive
    December 6, 2006

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    NAWWW!!!! that is so heartwarming ! The last light put a cap in this poems ass - so to speak It tied it all off nicely and I am sure there are many people out here in AP land that feel the same way and you spoke for the ones that didn't voice.

    I love it; this poem is really fleeting and a new favourite of mine

    Your an excellent writer and your words never fail to move. Another pro write by the excellent emma!! *gangsta poses*

    Much love'n'peace

    Zo


  • Black Mamba
    December 6, 2006

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    Look, I'm not laughing. This is sweet, I don't really know how much to say about stuff...but I'm happy that you have found someone that makes you feel this way! its a cute poem, and no, I'm not laughing at you as you said I would. I'm smiling for you.