As I step down my throne
Walk with grandeur
Softly, quietly on my tip toes
Through the veranda leading into my room
I place my sparkling crown
Onto the antique wooden vanity
You come knocking at my door
Pleading to open the doors
To let me hear your importune
I dress in rush to open big doors
I stand to see you glaring at me
With your teary eyes
I gently reach, pat your shoulders
Smile at you to ask
What is it that I can do to ease your distress?
You stumble, you stammer
The feeble word you then whisper
I’m hurting and no one cares
So, I come to you for seeking justice
“You are the humble queen”
“Preacher of divine love”
“You are the iron pillar”
“With a bleeding tender heart that knows to cry”
You say so gently to me
As I smile at your complaining compliments
I still don’t understand what you want?
You once said, “you can’t say no”
Love is all it takes to make someone happy
You are strictly against breaking already bleeding heart
For love so pure
You would get off your throne
And never wear your crown
If you were in love with an ordinary person like me
This is what I want you to have to remember
The time has come to show me, you’re a true royalty
Who never backs out on her spoken words
You would cut yourself with the sharpest sword
If you had to ever choose between
Your kingdom over a human being.
I’m no knight and shine
But you are the almighty queen
I wanted to let you know
Before you order for me to be thrown
I loved you from the first moment
And will do so until my last.
I’ve said it
Now it’s your turn
Kill me if you must
But my spirit will still haunt
You every day and night
Speechless, abhorred, yet confused
I think to myself, how can a queen
Be with an ordinary person
My heart immediately whispered
Before you were made queen
God sent you as a human being
I walk away from him
In silence, no peaking sound
Dressed in royal blue
Back to my throne
Called on everyone
To make an announcement
I love everyone
My kingdom means my life
I’ve ruled over long period of time
Little I knew
I also ruled your heart
The power of mine
Is even beyond my own imagination
I never knew the span
Of my strength being your inspiration
Now that I know
This man before us
Is weakened on his knees
He says I rule him, inside and out
He’s at my mercy today
I have the power to regret
He will be heart broken
But smilingly will die for me
Yes now it’s my turn
I hereby get off my throne
Kiss it with passion
Lay my jeweled crown
In the center of the throne
For I’ve the courage to walk away
From all the luxuries and riches
To be with my man
Who has all the tender love for me
Only just for me
I only gave up the throne
But I’m still an almighty queen
Ruling the most precious possession
A man’s heart
That ‘s now taken
By none other than his queen.
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Thats on word I can describe this poem it seems all your poems I have love to death once again you are very talented at writing poems I enjoyed reading this one I have no decided this one is my favorite it shows what someone would do for another if they are in love. You are very good Stop being so good lol kidding i think wat drew me in was
~The time has come to show me, you’re a true royalty Who never backs out on her spoken words You would cut yourself with the sharpest sword If you had to ever choose between Your kingdom over a human being.~ It drew me in start to finish loved the poems can't wait to read more ~kal
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-fresh-original- exotic? :D
I very much enjoyed this, the style and content are original and the story line is enticing and alluring..
A very much loved the title 'queen' in this plot, very effective.
I adore how you often leave the insignificant words out, and keep the flow consistent... You know, lots of writers throw in article words like 'and, the, to, so, just, only' alot.. But you don't do that... That shows more effort and thought put into your work..
Well done, and great penning!
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(I probably don't make sense, but I try!)
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Hun, that was AMAZING! I loved this poem. Where'd you get the idea of this poem. Was it like based on a dream you had or something? It was amazing. Keep it up. Off to read your next poem. Byebye
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I like all poetry that encourages honesty, equality between men and woman, for love is not a competition, as sex is to compliment, not control, one's spirit as it sings in harmony with another...
I like how you use poetry to express where on your sacred journey you are at any given moment. That's awesome. I sometimes use poetry to journal my heart. But you use a story form I might experiment with at some point.
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Bows to the queen
this was amazing, you did a awesome and golden job on this i mean that, i loved reding it and it was amazing keep it flowing -
I LOVED IT ! ! !
Wow...thats nice i realy love this one i like the ending lines that show it all come together..."I only gave up the throne
But I’m still an almighty queen
Ruling the most precious possession
A man’s heart
That ‘s now taken
By none other than his queen." and only a Queen may rule me aswell. -
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Yes My Lil Monkey, Only Queen for You is destined
Haven't you read Sadly Lacking before commenting? I really want to know the lacking part so that I can improvise on it. But I won't complain on getting beautiful comments either. Thanks Monkey, I hope you're not monkeying around with me and just saying to be nice. are you? Either way, you sure took time to read my poem, I'm honored. Thanks again for the encouragement.
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Beautiful Write
I like the concept of the poem being written on, like royality. It's quit different. Really cute picture
Everything about your write is superb. Really good free verse poem
Snappy
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Thank you my friend Doodles
I love your doodlie doo name hehehe! Thanks my friend for taking time to enjoying reading it. You smiley applauds are always uplifting that perfectly matches your uplifting spirit. Thank hun for your time again
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Sadly lacking
It seems as though you strive towards a point that you never quite reach, fluctuating between pretentious snobbery and coquetish drivel. Just becuase you spend five pages grasping towards dignity and respect doesn't mean you're getting it. This is sadly lacking in substance and consists of fluffs of over-fancy words and badly linked phrases. -
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Thanks for wasting your time on My poem!
I appreciate your lacking comment, not everyone has the capacity to understand everyone's writing. Neither can I do so nor can you, my friend. All I can say thanks for stopping by and hope you don't waste anymore of your precious time off of your precious life on reading my poems, which I'm sure you won't Thanks again for stopping by Blade Dancer.
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ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. BRILLIANT AND WONDERFUL WRITING. THE IMAGERY WAS SUPERB. I LOVED THE FLOW, LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS PIECE. YOU ARE QUEEN TO A MAN'S HEART. THAT IS THE MOST IMPORTANT POSSESSION OF ALL. BRILLIANT
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Thanks Wayne!
Oh my lord! thanks for capitalized encouragement. I'm glad you find my poem enjoyable to read. Can't thank you enough for absolutely beautiful comment and smiling applauds at me. Thanks so ver much for your time.
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this is really good well done! i loved the idea of this is was a nice sweet write. well done and i look forward to reading more off yuor work
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Thanks Bleeding-Within
Thanks sweet-P for your beautiful comment. I've read your writing and you are already surpassing expectations. You'll excel in everything you do, shows in your writings. Take care & thanks for reading.
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Bitter, once again you have surpassed all expectations. Sometimes you have to follow your heart and not do what is expected of you in order to find happiness....Thank you for reminding us all of that.
Keep up the nice work.
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Thanks Sweet Mia
You got the idea, this was just a friendly challenge posed by my AP friend - OldCoasty2 (check him out, his poetry is good 2). I'm glad you find it surpassing expectatinos. As always, your comments are as wonderful as you are. Thanks again for your time.
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Thy Queen of Hearts
A Queen; Ruler of many,
Giving thy throne to another
For the romance of thine Prince
To set thy heart free; elope
To live in blissful harmony, enveloped
Evermore; With thy King.
Thy heart is yours, O, bless'd
Queen of hearts.
Great write. Loved the images portrayed here
Well done.
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Thanks Jeffro
I'm glad you like my poem and my imagination. Thanks for reading and enjoying it too. I cannot thank you enough for such a poetically charged comment. Thanks again Jeffro
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awesome
the man there made one major decision. him, being a commoner, he understood that the society that he lives in wouldn't allow, but even being enslaved, he gave his heart for love, even if he will suffer...love will do that and when the heart's given...that's one major price that's paid...awesome write and very thought provoking
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Thanks Firey Heart!
Thanks so much for enjoying reading it. I love teh smiley applauds smiling at me. YOu are too kind to give your points. Thanks again for wonderful comment that encourages me to write better poems. Thanks Hun!
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SEE I knew yu could do it, excellent, outstanding well written!!!! what more can i say you accepted the challenge and won overwhelmingly, nice nice piece of work here BC. LOved it,
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thanks a trillion! Being a queen I can afford it!
Thanks buddy, for inspiring me to pick up my crown and turn into a queen. No whip lashes, no soldiers I need...all i need is me and loving man for me to be a queen and rule my world...for a second i loved being a queen...hehehehe
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