Humanoid, robotic
Distorted plastic logic
New communication
Enter dialog articulation
Equalising discordance
Destabilising dissonance
Routine ecology
Natural etymology
Calculating effectivity
Adjust tension, electricity
New error detected
Solution re-erected
Product of inevitability
Near-infinite flexibility
Machinal superiority
Undivided symmetry
Survival rate: zero
For the fallen carbon hero
System synchronicity
At optimum efficiency
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YAY
I LOVE YOUR DICTION! KUDOS -
Confusing, but good!
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Nice Write
I dont really understand it, but I dont have to, only you do. Still a great piece anyway tho. My favorite lines would have to be these "
Machinal superiority
Undivided symmetry
Survival rate: zero
For the fallen carbon hero
System synchronicity
At optimum efficiency"
Again, this is a really nice write.
Keep The Ink Flowing
~Little_Dark_Poet~
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Awsome!
I LOVE the rhyme! its great! The rythem and everything is awsome!
im a huge sci-fi fan. sorry. lol great poem, rythem and rhyme are great
. Rewarded 4
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You should enter this about Star Trek, sounds a lot like it. Not that I watch Star Trek because I don't like it but you know it's kinda funny, my ex LOVES the show! Like the big words you use
Keep up the good work!
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