Come in, take off your shoes please
Back there please take your seat
I’ll be right back, I say
As I walk away
The door behind us shuts tight
Walking on your tip toes
You quietly place yourself
On the cold cushioned iron chair
You look left and right
Turn back and find a brick wall
Look back in front
Find yourself gazing into the long thin alley
Behind dirty dark grey sheer curtains
You look around
You find
A leaning tower of pizza tipped over the painting hung loosely on the wall
There is not much furniture, only a small table
Sitting on it old black & white TV
Staring right back at you
With all black and white characters
No loudness, only delayed whispers
As you try hard to lean over
Hoping you’ll hear the voices
But instead you tip over
Underneath the upside chair
Quickly get up, straighten your dress
Put the chair back on its place
Where it left its mark on old plush tattered rug
A deep long tainted sigh
Overwhelmed with trickling fear
Butterflies start to flutter
Somewhere in the center of your stomach
Cling! Sudden deafening feeble sound
Off you jump off your skin
Leaving your body frame
As you see falling sparkling skeleton
From the stairs of attic right above
You look up, eyes popped wide
As you hear your name called
Echoing in the room
And your alert ears
Come my dear, you know the reason
Why you came here
Do I need to whisper again
And remind you of our promise
Clap, look into the eyes in the darkness
Of the stairs of the attic
Your head is now stuck
Looking up towards the darkest skies
Are you still there?
Come see what you are missing?
For this is what precisely you need.
You’ve already made your promise to me
I can’t let you now break it
For if you did I’ll have to open the doors of armoire
You see on your side
And you there you definitely don’t want to enter
The scrawny fingers
Reach out and grab you
You silently shout
Breaking every streak of silence
As you stand glued
To the plush underneath your feet
Slowly the fingers join its hands
Then comes the lurking arms
Followed is the face
Sunk into the body frame
At the end the legs trail back with one foot
One look and, you freeze
Locked inside four walls
No where to hide
All windows and doors have broken latches
Your eyes roll and gaze around
While your head is glued in one place
Perspiration fountains down your skin
Leaving you all sheer wet
Shining diamonds of your sweat
Puts a crown on your forehead
Please don’t
Let me just go
I will, you hear
You smile
But, wait he again tells you
But only if you return
To keep your binding promise you made
To me
For I am the master
The only one
Whom you fear
For I will hunt you down
To remind you for what you said
To me, to me
For I am….
And you run
Through the closed doors….
Spooky someone whispers into your ears
Shocked, again, you turn
And again you see….
Author notes
Here's another one to play tricks on your mind, body and soul>>>>
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Oh Yes!
I remember this one! This one for sure! Is a good one for the project! Save this out.
This'll be a great book. Alittle bit of something for everyone.
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Ew....
Yep Spooky alright and now in my imagination. Ew...That's some Great writing!
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Thanks again
I cannot thank you enough for your support... I truly appreciate your time & glad to know you like my weird poems... are you scared now? good now let your imagination go bouncing off the walls... thanks for your time again & absolutely love the yahooing applauds... take care Minoo
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Metaphorically Magnificent!
There was a certain twist to it. The symbolic fixation was truly awe-inspiring. If there was ever a time where I’ve read something worth reading, that was today.
Keep penning on and have a nice day.
Blessed be.
†Sky† *still remarkably awed*
oh and yes, I have foud the time again to make comments.
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Thanks a ton Sky!
I love taking pictures of sky & I've tons of them, evening sunset, sunrise, storm, beautiful day, you name it & every picture is different, only we need to see beyond the normality, so I love your name...sky is the limit. Thanks hun for stopping by & reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed it too. I'm so appreciative of you taking time to leave a wonderful encouragement in your comment. Thanks again sweetie. Take care. My aunt is from Phillipines too....
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Cool!
Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it
. Don't know what else to say. This was just to good for words. Keep it up hun. I'm off to read your other poem. You do have a wonderful imagination however I disagree when you say your imagination is twisted 
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wicked
wow this is awesome it could have been scarier but it really brought me into the story i was really into it I was acctually imagining myself in this situation and this happening to me how awesome is that its pretty wicked well i guess that means you did your job great job love it keep writeing you are a great artist and you really did a great job on this poem
love to hate
kaka
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Sweeeet! I did Get N Side your head!
I love it, I understood the meaning of your name hehehe. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for such lovely encouragement and I love the yahooing smiley applauds. I really appreciate you taking time to read and comment. Thanks again
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I love the convictiveness expressed!!
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Hi Fallower Again
Thanks honey again for stopping by and I'm happy you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for spending your time on my poem.
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ooooooohhhhhhhh scary mary
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Are You Scared???
Good you should be scared, I can be really scary hehehehehe Thanks for reading it, so what do you think that I see?
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this sounds a little messy, oh no someone from the outside has see my room, quick i got to clean, lol, to be honest i have no idea but you did a great job on this and i loved it keep it flowing
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Thanks again Prodigy
You have to stop being so nice and keep coming back to reading my poem...just kidding hehehehe not about the part of you being nice. Thanks again for your time and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. This is the idea, what it is you need to let your imagination go wild on this one. Thanks for a great comment.
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tantalizing & dreadful!
This is written by a male for a female? It is confusing, in a way, because I don't connote sexual anything to fright. It sounds halloween like. Spooky, indeed, but also it was sexualized, so the mixture was effective, in that it led someone from here to there, with a commanding presence. I really liked the crown of diamonds. That was REALLY a great word-picture. Wish I had thought od it.
It started off business like. But magnetized one's attention down and up that alley, all the while riveting one's attention through many tools of writing. I might try one like this some day, just because I read ths...
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Thanks Timothy
Thank you so much for such an uplifting comment by letting me know I inspired you to write something like this. Aren't you sweet! Thanks a lot for your time. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and had spooky fun. Then made sure you write such lovely comment. Thanks again my friend, thanks.
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I think you could have even written more, as this could be like an epic.- line 80- let me just go - forgot the t. You see yourself I guesas. Interesting write- deep and inside oneself. Very creative and interesting to read.
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Thank You Ms. Grannyeri
It feels even better when you are commented from one of the great poets you admire. Thanks you so much for taking time and reading my poem and in such detail that you caught my mistake. Thanks a million for your encouragement, I can feel it as smiley applaud yahoos.
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i loved this one it was good keep it up
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Thanks Swwetheart
Thanks devils owner for your smiling yahooing applauds. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. But sweeT, can you think what it is I see? Just wondering. I still thank you for taking time to enjoy reading my poem. Thanks hun!
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line 48-You head is now stuck
*your*
This is great! it catches my attention quikly, wich is good because of how long it is. The weirdest part is that I'm wearing a dress. I don't do that much.
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Thanks Bryan!
Thanks for the catching my mistake, now its corrected and for that I thank you. Thank you so much for smiley applauds. I'm galdd it caught your attention...it's okay..may be you can try a dress just for a day??? don't mind me. I'm just representing devil's twisted mind. hehehehe. Overall thanks for crusing through author's mind, this is best compliment a writer can get. Thanks again my friend.
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WOW!!
This write is soo detailed and very descriptive! You've shown the reader everything that makes this a good write. You truly grabbed my atttention! Great use of imagery! Loved it! Every word just got better and better and you used very well! Keep it up!
xoxoKerry
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Hey Kerry
Thanks for stopping by again. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it and you've made me feel really good with such a beautiful comment. Biggest fear of a poet, I think is people misinterpreting the idea hidden and will miss the underlying essence, but you girl made me feel like a poet. Thanks hun!
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This was very deep and thought provoking...it's like a metaphor poem almost. It was enjoyable read.
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Thanks Kari
Thanks for taking time off of your precious life and stopping by to read and comment on it. It's an encouragement every poet yearns and readers like you and me make it possible to feed to their yearnings. Thanks my friend for your time
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you made me frightened with your words...
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Thanks Nilav!
My work here is done...now I shall walk down to another person down the lane...welcome to the twisted mind of devil.hehehehehehe Thanks hun for being scared, the idea of spooky is spoken.
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BRILLIANT AGAIN
HAHAHAH BRILLIANT. I LOVED THIS. SUCH IMAGERY AS WELL. AMAZING WRITING. WELL, I REALLY DO NOT KNOW WHAT THIS COULD BE? I THINK IT COULD BE SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE MIND. THE VICTIM IS TRAPPED WITHIN THEIR OWN MINDS? I DO NOT KNOW. HAHAHA
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Thanks Again Wayne!
Thanks a lot for stopping by and taking time to read my poem...welcome to the devil's twisted mind...hehehehe Your interpretatins is also so cool. I'm loving to know every person is different and their mind think differently. Thanks for smileys, roses (one of my fav flowers) and ofcourse jumping applauds. Thanks for all.
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Amazing
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Thanks again The Dark Luna Goddess
I am gald I served you right and this is my offering to satisfy your darkness, my Dark-Luna Goddess. Thanks so much for your incredible comments that make me jump up and down sitting on my chair. Thanks sweeT.
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Thank you so much Golden Falcon!
Thank you for being the very first one to be drawn into the imagination of my twisted brain. Welcome take a seat and I'll be back for you.hehehehehe I'm gald you enjoyed reading my imagination. I appreciate your time. -
good discriptive words makes you feel like ur there i love poems like this love being taken to a authers world and seeing what they see means u have a wonderful imagination
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