Yeah, you used me
yea, it hurt.
But baby,
if you called me
i'd come running.
Oh baby,
use me
use me again
like the whore i am
i'll be your bitch
whenever you want me.
Yeah, you used me
yea, it hurt.
But baby,
if you called me
i'd come running.
So use me like
the whore i am,
Act like the
cunt you are.
We'll be a
p e r f e c t
match.
A contest entry
- That One Love by Painful Expressions.
600 points, ended December 15, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
option 1. I know it's pretty rubbish but it's what came out when i read the options...
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Wow, that sounds just like me in my relationship with my ex, only much better put than everything I've ever written. Really well done, keep it up.
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"So use me like
the whore i am,
Act like the
cunt you are.
We'll be a
p e r f e c t
match. "
- that's sad and desperate, a dirty truth that hits you like a big fat slap in the face when you read it.
i havnt commented on your stuff in a while and this is quite old, but i like the truth in it and the disgust in the way you express it.
keep it up darling <333 x -
Thats really good, but sort of sad as well
but awesome all the same
"So use me like
the whore I am
Act like the
cunt you are"
Brillaint
Katy♥ -
Great Write!
This was a wicked write. I enjoyed reading this write and can relate to it. Your words were very strong, beautiful and powerful. I hope that everything works out for you hun. You are a wonderful person and really deserve a break, love and understanding. Keep writtign hun you are so great at it and talented. I love reading all of your works.
stay strong and if you need anything just let me know.
~Chrissy~
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It's not rubbish i really like it..and its definately a different aspect of love. Yays for swearing XD!
Oh baby,
use me
use me again
like the whore i am
i'll be your bitch
whenever you want me<--- my favourite part...it also kinda reads like song lyrics
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thanks.. yea swearing is good XD
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Wow! I just read this poem and it's not rubbish! It's great I'm gonna go read more of your poems. Well see you later. Bi
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thank you x
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Awww, this was a wonderfully written poem, but I'm sad at the content. That's so sad that's what your love story is. You don't have to keep on running back you know, maybe wait he'll come running back, or maybe you just move on. Whatever you decide to do, just use your brain first take care and all the best in the contest. =]
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aw thanks hun. i know thats what i need to do..but like the contest says you just cant help it. thanks for reading x
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