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So long for a second hello...

                I can remember
                                the way we were.
                We sparked off each other
                                          and made play of time.
              It was you and me
                                            Me and you
                                                    Nothing could knock me down
                                                                      Nothing could hurt me with you
                          [I knew you’d pick me up]

                I can remember those songs I listened to
                              [Cried to]
                                        On repeat
                                              For hours
                                    When there was no one else
                                To listen to

                        I remember your leaving
                                                    You slipped away.

                      I fell
                          [Breaking like a mirror //burned// with the image of \\you\\]
                                                            <<..Tears..>>
                                                        Cut up and broken.

                              I saw every moment you hurt
                                              And knew I couldn’t help
                                        [Not my place]
                                                            Watched you fall

                              /Vendettas/
                                          /Mendacity/

                            [[Left in the dark]]

                                  Seven months,
                                              Fourteen thousand miles of tears,
                                                            [Things begin to mead]

                            Sitting on the bus home,
                                                Tears flow freely
                                    //and I let myself admit//
                                                                              <. i've missed you .>

Author notes

This poem was basically inspired from something that happened to me earlier this year. And thankfully, shes now back in my life and everything is good between us.
*Luffles Manda lots* <3

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  • Dirty and Broken
    December 11, 2006
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    wow...very vyer good....


  • morgana raven
    December 11, 2006
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    [Breaking like a mirror //burned// with the image of \\you\\]

    i love that line. this is a great piece of work, and i havent seen anything on here by you in a while, so yay. great stuff
    laurax [no idea why i still sign my name as im pretty sue you know who i am ]