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Inadequate

I'm simply inadequate.

Let's just put it blatantly,
Shall we?

You always have a perfect white smile
And your chest is at least a cup larger
You walk with grace I can't compare to
And you have everything you want
Just within your grasp.
You always look phenomenal
And make everyone laugh
And no one can compare
I cannot compare

You bring joy and laughter
And always have something to say
Or do, or plan.
And always,
You look at him with eyes saying
"Why do you get to have him?"
"Why is he yours?"

And honestly, I don't know
I'm just lucky, I guess.
Really lucky.

And really, you could
Probably have him if you wanted to
All you would have to say is "please"
And he would fall at your knees willingly

And you know it.
And I'm just waiting for you to do it.

Because I'm totally inadequate
When standing next to you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • ISpeakForTheTrees
    January 19, 2007
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    silly gemmie. Mark likes you. lots. Dunno how anyone could tear you two apart. : )


  • tatteredheartxx
    December 12, 2006
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    Aww this is so sad, Im sure that this guy, he loves you, and that he wouldn't just fall at a girls knees if she said please. It was a really great poem though, Very emotional and heart aching.

    Awesome Work.

    x


  • Ramona Wright
    December 11, 2006

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    woah. and whom is this prep you speak of lol? great poem though. i really liek it hun keep up the great work.