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Christ Christmas

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I'm dreaming of a Christ Christmas
Just like the ones we used to know
Where the Light of Jesus' glistens
And his children listen
To hear his word make hearts aglow
I'm dreaming of a Christ Christmas
With every Christmas card I write
May your souls be merry and bright
And may all your Christmases be light

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Based on "White Christmas" by Irving Berlin

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  • goalsv
    December 12, 2006
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    Great!

    Well done! Christmas should be about the birth of Christ, and the love he brings.

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 12, 2006

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    excellent~

    What a wonderful poem...
    And I was humming it as I read it...
    Love it and best of luck in the contest....
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • RayJon
    December 11, 2006
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    much appreciated

    Clever and timely. It is after all his birthday not Santa Clauses'


  • Bee gee gold member
    December 11, 2006
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    Christmas should be about Christ.

    I like how this is wrote itDoes go along like White Christmas but that doesn't matter.i like line 3,4.I like to hope people can find more about Christmas than worry about Santa and a whole room of gifts.I like all of it.very nice poem.No smutt sounds nice for a change.

  • berekah
    December 11, 2006

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    I really like this poem. Has a Godly spin to a famous pop song...and it is so right. It puts back in what the world seems to have taken out of christmas - the true reason for the celebration...Christ coming to earth and living just as we do with all the pain and anguiish...and then dying on the cross to save us. And I guess over the years the real meaning has just burnt out...and so amny people can't see it. Thank you for sharing this.
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