How could you ever beat,
The one girl you’re suppose to love?
I thought everything you said was true,
Then why do you push & shove?
I stood by your side,
From day one to the last.
But I had to erase you from my life,
You’re just my broken up past.
I can’t understand,
Why you cried so hard.
You should’ve known it was coming,
When I packed up my car.
You say I hurt you,
And it’s just a mistake.
I don’t even feel sorry anymore,
I just feel hate.
Author notes
No, I wasn't and am not now, in an abusive relationship. I'm smarter then that.
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
WOW! You have talent. Great write here. Abusive relationships are hard to get out of for some. Thank God your not or werent involved in one.
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I enjoyed this one a lot. Just like everyone else, I'm glad you're not writing about a personal experience. Good qrite
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I love it, it's very emotional. I'm sorry about your boyfriend, I guess it's surposed to be a learning experiance. I hope you're okay, abusive boyfriends are never good and it's hard to get away from them because it's usually a while before you find out what they are really like, and by then you always think you're in love with them. I think it's amazing you can do this, and I'm sure I'm not the only one who'll be here for you if you need help.
♥ Kas
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No huni, I'm not in an abusive relationship. I was just writing on another topic. Trust me, my fiance wouldn't lay a hand on me, but if he ever did, I'd leave, trust that. Thank you for your comment
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Very strong words and feelings you've expressed here sweety! I'm glad to see you back writing hunny
How are things going for you nowadays?
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I'm doing good. Still inlove, and all that crap. I'm sick though, have the flu
I miss you. I miss everyone here. I wasn't going to start writing again, until I got a gold membership. But I decided, I wanted to get back into it. I miss writing. Now it's like, I can't even express myself, and I was good last year. I'm not bragging, but I could write some good poetry, you know? Lol. But yeah, practice makes perfect, well not perfect, but better... haha. How are you and Jovy?
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We are doing wonderfully good too
somewhere next year we're going to look out to live together
I'm excited about that, but also not
I don't like too much change, and living together is changing like everything, you know 
but I'm still looking forward to it... strange huh
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Wow!
Now this poem has a lot of anger and emotions in it. I really like how you described how you feel. I`m glad that it wasn`t you in such a relationship.
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haha
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