She came to my door
With no apparent motivation
I desperately tried to ignore
My feelings of elevation
The visit was ever so brief
But in that time my soul
Found tranquil relief
As love filled an empty hole
A divine appointment to be sure
For once again she had a need
To help make her air more pure
That neither of us had perceived
It would seem that God the Father
Has given me much love
That he blesses and carries farther
For this beautiful delicate dove
Author notes
I was home from work taking a needed sick day when a friend of mine paid a visit. She had no idea I was even home. While we were there, we found and purchased an air filter for her air purifier. That was not the intention of her visit. We perceived that was God's intention.
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wonderful! The dove landed on Jesus's should I think doing the baptism.
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You did a terrific job with this. I love the rythem and flow. This is a great way of showing that God works in many ways. good job. -
I loved this poem! Where'd you get the idea to write this poem? Your poems are far better than mines! Keep up the great work! I'll be around to read and comment on more of your poems! Take care!
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Very beautiful work...
it is very beautiful write revealing the strength of the nature through the means of the happenings around and I agree with it completely...I am really impressed about the faith which has been brought out in this very heart touching work with so much trust and hope towards life and its light as well..it is just a pretty and heartfelt work indeed...
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Good write,flowed well.really enjoyed the feel of the write...Full of love and peace..
Peace was brought to you that day
Good penning keep up the good work...
God Bless
Have a Blessed Day
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Life moves in funny directions sometime. This poem just flowed along full of expressive emotions. A real feel good write probably need s few more of these poems in the world today. nicely penned thank you for the pleasure of the read.
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Really pretty poem! It's got such joy and affection in it, and it's very inspirational. The rhyming scheme works really well also, very simple but effective. I especially love the part:
"The visit was ever so brief
But in that time my soul
Found tranquil relief
As love filled an empty hole".
Beautiful.
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