I am...
Twisted, uplifted.
I will be...
Faceless, embrace-less.
Can't you see my...
Hatred, dismantled from society as I am?
I don't need you by my side.
When I get close to you,
Just walk on by.
I should not be...
Blamed, ashamed, deranged, frustrated & aggravated.
There isn't much I can say but...
"I'm Fine."
~Rhiannon
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good
this was good . one question was this about anyone ? my fav. part was
I don't need you by my side.
When I get close to you,
Just walk on by.
this was a good poem keep on writing
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very good
you are embraced i do see all of you in this and find it a very different look on things but find that absolute wonderment of finding you are fine.
good very good
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Actually, I had forgotten I wrote this. It's seems so long ago.
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oooh deep
the reflections of pained soul who feels ot they don't fit anywhere -
great work...though i do have a question
you mentioned Rhiannon at the end two poems...why?
are you talking about the welsh goddess? i feel a strong connection to her, as she is my vision of the goddess -
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Thanks again for your comment.
Rhiannon is the name that I go by. It's not my birth name but I have been called that for many years now. I was told it suited me better than Kristie. So I sign all my writes with that name. Eventually when money allows, I'll change my name to that. I'm aware of her as well.
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great
i know that i am always dismantled from society and that makes me the individual that i am great write you were added to the christmas story i thought i put in but i realized after i left the library so i fixed it i do not like leaving friends or family out
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Very good
A strong well put poem. Wording is great, flow is very good and the message is strongly understood. I admire you for your strength in writing. Your poem is direct and to the point. Every line in every stanza is like a part in a story. It would not be complete without that sentence.
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Thank you so much for such a kind comment. I really appreciate the comment and the applaude as well as the time you took to read it. It means a lot.
~Rhiannon
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