Aching pain, bloody tears.
This misery, I cannot take...
Who cares?
Smile...happiness everyday.
I am good at faking it...
Who cares?
This heartfelt torture is all that is left.
My heart lies shattered on the ground...
Who cares?
There is a hole this bitter life digs into.
It bleeds as life digs deeper into my wounded soul...
Who cares?
~Rhiannon
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i understand how u feel in that poem. especially where u say:
"Smile happiness everyday
Im good at faking it..."
i have 2 fake happiness everyday b/c i have so many things that hurt and stress me out. its like the pain neva ends. anywayz good poem. -
pianfu
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yah
yep anover perfect on . whats your secret of making great poems mind all suck
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My writes aren't good. But, thank you.
You're sweet.
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awesome
awww it sounds so sad it reminds me of my great pain.
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Life is an anagram of file, of which there are over six billion run by a program that is about to crash in a way that makes Windows look like a Saturday afternoon picnic. This world needs a reboot. Thank you for sharing and creating.
U
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.
Life is so far gone, rebooting wouldn't help I don't believe. We need a whole new program.
Hope you're doing ok though. It's good to hear from you again.
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I'm afraid you're correct. Probably format /u is needed to get rid of this corrupted program.
U
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*laughs* I like the way you think.
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Very Powerful!
Though short it still packs a whallop.....filled with so much emotion.....still enjoyed the read....Who cares? I do......smiles, Terry -
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Thank you...I appreciate the comment.
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great
when people tell me to smile i say do you realy want me to do that i only smile when i am being truly evil
i tell them if you see a smile on my face run in the other direction when i went to the dr. one time a nurse told me that since i was in no pain i should smile my dr. heard her say that and i said no you do not want to see me smile the dr. a few doors down said that he seconded the motion then i laughed and we had a good time love papa
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papa...
thank you for your sweet comment. You always make me feel better.
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