Even with tears running down her cheeks
He doesn't seem to see that she is dying inside
He didn't take her serious when she wanted to die
He just thought she was kidding speaking of sucide
Well one day he'll really see
The pain she felt every second of everyday
Because one night he's carelessness will go to far
And she take her very life away
For he's the only reason she's living
And that reason has now turned it's back
It's left her in the cold damp darkness
No more light, all there is is black
Each drop of blood she now bleeds
Will be from his costly mistake
Because all along he thought she put herself here
He thought that her depression was fake
Well when she is laying there dead
Upon that red blood stained floor
The truth then will strike his poor heart
How she really couldn't take the sadness anymore
And a note shall lay beside, telling him the truth
The reall story of why she did this sinfull crime
For it was all because her love didn't see
That her hour glass of life, was running out of time
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this is great.. i love it!!!
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Really depressing, not that I can get any more depressed thank I am already.
But that's ... too over the edge.
jan
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Truth
It's true i hope ur alright and keep writing im sure that helps with ur emotions right
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beautifuly
tragic.
CJ
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