When the bells of wonder, sweetly ring
The stars of midnight, shall be dear
And silence whispers, a song to sing
The gates of enchantment opened near.
Those white snow flakes are just so warm
And the kiss of moonlight, lingers still
The world is fine and all is calm
When the dance of pleasure, comes to fill.
The scents are sweet, in the home I built
Where the season is spring, forever on show;
Not a place, for regret nor guilt,
While fantasy rules and memories grow..
The skies shall send a stage to spare,
While the ploy and sketch, my mind decides;
To weave a dream and hold with care
A vacant place, still resides.
That’s my land of dearest dreams
With sweet, sweet thoughts and sparkling gleams.
In a list
A contest entry
- INVITE ONLY CONTEST #3 FOR AP GREETERS ONLY by Lionslove.
300 points, ended January 5, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Adorable sweet words.Fantasy and dreams blended..its so enchanting.This is incredible.I guess you won the gold trophy this poem deserves.Best of luck
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raspberry what wonderlands you always manage to weave with you wonderful use of words.How wonderful it must be to live in your mind,all seem peaceful and so serene A beautiful piece and I can well see why it collected a gold award Excellent
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Now this is a sweet little thing... Can't help putting a smile on your face can it. I also love the piccie, so cute
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Beautiful
This is such a beautiful poem. the words, the picture , the soothing background, everything about it. So neatly done, Loved it. childlike faith
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Love it!!
It's like a soft, cuddly, spring fresh teddy bear homeI totally love it...Makes me wish I were there
Whyitt U.
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Absolutely exquisite. There is a serenity to this that is just too beautiful. Awesome job. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks dear
Thankyou for the kind comment I am honored to receive the gold here. Though it is painful to realise that the person who commented on this poem is no more now..
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comment to come later - on finalists list
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What a delightful magical home you have raspberry I do love Spring ...would be nice if we could wake up to a Spring morning no matter what the season.
Loved this,
Good luck in the contest,
galfalfa
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Beautiful and Cheerful!
This is a happy write! A land where children delight..I hope this is successful in the contest...Title and everything is just perfect! -
This is so beautiful, like a fairy tale. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. Hugs, Patricia
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