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affable (experiment)

at some point every
one of you will take note
of this phenomenon
the daydream
mixed with randomness
and abstract
mindsets
in concrete settings

maybe the next
time i blurt out
some seemingingly unrelated
nonsensical
rambling
you'll realize...

It's
not
about
you
.
thats why
i didnt acknowledge friendly smiles
or return them
...plus
your breath stinks

Author notes

its just me, trying to explain in a bukowski-esque manner :-)

critique plz, comments are cool, but I'd like feedback I can use to improve the piece :-) thanx!

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