M ystical soul
I nterested in alluring you to her
N aughty world where there is
O bsession for
O utrageous laughters that
M akes life worth living to
A pplaud to the winnings over all the pains and sorrows
L urking in our lives
I ntriguing us to give up our dreams that
K eep us all rocking alive
And, it ain't happening
Because Dreams are what
We are all about
For They keep our hearts beating
And help soar our tainted spirits
With the hope to touch the skies
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I love this!!!!! So, do I call you Minoomalik? Umm, do you have a shorter name?
That's really your name? It's absolutely lovely!!! 
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Hehe, mommy you made me laugh! I really loved this poem mommy! Your always great when it comes to poems and of course anything else. Then again you are my mommy! Maybe I'll be a great poet like you one day! Your a great poet mommy! Keep up the great work. My favorite lines were "Makes life worth living to
Applaud to the winnings over all the pains and sorrows
Lurking in our lives
Intriguing us to give up our dreams that
Keep us all rocking alive" Take care mommy!
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Laughter may be thy best medicine, thine sayeth,
But this be'est not a laughing poetic flow of ink,
This be'eth a beautiful soul-touching
Masterpiece of writing; Soar forth with thine wings,
Hold forth thine dream; Mindset; Sent skyward bound,
Waiteth forth thy dream to becomest a reality,
Whilst Angel hearest thine request and send forth,
A bird of Paradise; Bound for'st thine's admirational pleasure,
Dream on .. for thou art gifted in the ways;
Of Poetic Form; And beautiful expressions.
Jeffro
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lol, this was silly but it was good to you did a great job on this keep it flowing cause i loved it
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it is not silly a very well written acrostic poem that has life and depth this is a very powerful write keep it up-William
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nothing to laugh at at all, this was so heartfelt and beautiful, very finley penned BC. loved it
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Minoo, you little minx, you made me giggle with this, and you are too cute sometimes. But you know you are my sissy and love you so much, You can always brighten my day, and this was like a little breath of sunshine.
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If you call this attempt stupid, then mine is surely the definition of a vegetable. I like this it works well and says a lot about the kind of person you are.
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it is a very good attempt of an acrostic poem, and possesses great promise. I do look forwards to readinf more of your work
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Thank you My Passionate Knight!
You are a darling & a sweet person to actually be the first one to ready my stupidity that's beyond me...In any rate, I appreciate your support & encouragement. Thanks for reading it too.Thanks again
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