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Burst

Burst..

Break..


Twist...

Turn...

Can my mind take it?
The abuse you throw towards it?
The blame you force me to recognize?
The lies, betrayals, and false hopes?
Would you ever take them back?
Even if you could?
Just for a second?

I never would.


Maybe my mind deserves to burst.

Does it suck? You know it does.

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  • InfiniteCaitlin
    December 22, 2006

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    Wow... I feel this way alot.. I really liek this poem, it tugs at my heart strings.. I love the way you put the begining with the space between the words.... very well written!!!