Cold Vampire Stairs guiding to the eternal darkness
Where the demon of pains and miseries is calling out my name
Alluring me to his forsaken kingdom to enslave me for his pleasures until eternity
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Sometimes this is what life means...
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I like the way this is written. The darker side of life. I'd like to say keep this one out in our second pile. Placement of this one will be crucial it has to be just in the right spot. i'll be stuggling with the same when I put my three romance poetry books together. In making the reader think later after putting the book down to do daily chores or in talking with a friend about this wonderful thought provolking book. The ultimate goal word of mouth.
Oh! Ps. Since you eat vegetables wouldn't sucking blood be total hell? Just a thought.
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For all their reputation and whatnot, I think it might be worth it all to become a vampire. Psychic (well, somewhat) powers to lure in the weak minded and turn them into whatever you want, the powers of darkness, lords of the night. Kinda cool if you think about it. This write made me think about that, and I like it a lot just because of that. One of the oldest legends still makes an impact in this day and age. Good job on reminding us.
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hmmmmm, i used to hear just the demon's voice to but think something kind of hit me, i think it was a brick and that changed, this is ood you painted something dark in my head keep it flowing
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Wow
me like, this poem, good job.
red roses
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