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Under Six Feet

As the winds gently stroke the yester swings back and forth
Time machine suddenly threw me back to the day at our favorite spot where we said our goodbyes
With a promise to meet again, but only you'd forgotten to tell me it will be under six feet

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  • Bob Fox
    August 16, 2007
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    oh boy

    what can one say. Six feet under seems to be our destiny. But oh the thought


  • Crimson Lotus
    December 23, 2006
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    Sissy.....Your son is right....this write worries me....It's...different for you, a very good write, but different....this is something that most would expect from me....You know We love you and if you need to talk you can always come to us right? I love you sis.
    ~ Mia

    • Live4FandFs silver member
      December 23, 2006
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      My Mia Dear

      YOu sis is fine...can't get rid of her that easily I've come to drive you to insanity & help you climb the walls Babe I'm fine. I know since yesterday,, all that's popping in my mind is darkness...Damn Christmas that reminds me of Matt *crying* I'm just fine & I'm your sister & so we are alike . Thanks babe

  • Dragon Of The West
    December 23, 2006

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    You are worrying me, mom, and it's not good to worry your son. I realize I probably have nothing to worry about (because you'll tell me not to) but not the point. Anyway, this was an interesting write. I get a lot of things from it, and although it is definetely dark (and sorta scary) I would like to see a lot of this. You are very good at it.


  • Disturbed Prodigy gold member
    December 23, 2006

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    bitter you kind of got me worrying about you here, these are some overly deep poems the aura about them is different from that others, i am kind of getting scared here, keep it flowing

    • Live4FandFs silver member
      December 23, 2006
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      Hi DP!

      Thank you so much to stop by and read this piece and you are a darling to leave such a thoughtful concerned comment.. I'm fine & in good health I really appreciate your time & kindness always
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