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[ Looking at the screen. ]

Looking at the screen.
All the convos in the CB.
Then in comes Lee.
and all the girlys screeeeeeeem.

We fought at first tooth and nail.
till both of us were tired and pale.
now we are AP bros.
maybe even hussies i suppose.

So I write this poem to show my support.
even though i could school him on a paintball court.
His rap is sick and his rhymes are crazy.
I think hes in love with his lady.

soo ill keep this short and sweet.
cuz those are wht descibe lee.
Happy Birthday AP bro.
but for your 21st im gonna buy you a hoe.

one last thing before i leave.
why the hell does lee
always have to sit on me??
jkjk


*Happy Birthday*

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  • SammyJo
    January 4, 2007
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    nice

    wow that was a very good happy birthday poem for your friend. it was nice but the i'm getting u a hoe was a little creepy but it's your poem not mine but i still really liked i thought it was funny 2. keep up the good work.

  • SithHappens
    December 25, 2006
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    Nice Cap'n, that sounds exactly like him


  • Vernal Bloom
    December 24, 2006

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    Sounds like fun! Ali is waiting impatiently for his 21st birthday because of that hoe j/k again it was fun to read this although I can’t believe Ali could fight with others. I hope he enjoys this as well.
    By the way, thank you for entering this contest. It was good to receive an entry from Ali’s AP bro and good luck in the contest :-)

    ~Massy~


  • lissa baby 2009
    December 23, 2006

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    interesting

    hey this is weird i wish someone would hae written me a poem for my birthday.

    anyway later
    missey anne marie