draw in the stars
where the light use to shine
deep in my heart
once upon a time
im sick of the darkness
that led me to believe
that im worthless, nothing
and everything in between
now im finding myself
in between the rainbows of time
slowly im fitting piece by piece together
as they fly into my mind
everything is changing
and im not afraid this time
theres no running or hiding
everything inside this disaster is mine
i dont need your help
even when i cry out in pain
this is my misery my life
that i myself have to gain
im sick of wandering around lifelessly
without a sense of direction
without anything to keep me alive
except for false affection
Please tell me what you think
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aww!
I really really liked this one!
It was cute and sad at the same time.
I could really relate to it. :/
Unfortunately.
This was my fav part
draw in the stars
where the light use to shine
deep in my heart
once upon a time
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thank youuuu.
<3
and im sorry you can relate.
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i totally relate, as always
love the last two stanzas. i can just see vivid imagery and feel what you feel.
ug, its 2:30 am
sorry for the sucky comment.
♥
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its fine.
none of your comments are sucky.
they all are awesome
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excellent
this is great i love it
kickin job
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thank you.
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This is really good, I can empathize, this is a great line: "everything inside this disaster is mine" -N
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thats one of my favorite lines too
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