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Silver Shadows

  Your neck against my lips,
Tasting of your essence.
I drink in the measure of your soul,
And weigh your worth with teeth.

Soft whispers of fingertips,
Summoning the beast within flesh,
Taking what you have offered,
Grasping still for more.
Thirsting for your depths,
Deeper meanings within rain.

Your eyes to mine,
Tumultuous in the heat of passion,
Intense and unmatched in their ferocity,
Silver shadows ensnaring me.
 
- © Foxlette 2006 

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When passion and lust mingle, powerful things happen.

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  • MahoganyFlow
    October 16, 2007

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    Your neck against my lips,

    Tasting of your essence.
    I drink in the measure of your soul,
    And weigh your worth with teeth.

    I didn't even get to finish the 1st stanza and I was blown away! I thought this was wonderful and puts anything I've written (that's seductive) to shame! This is bookmarked!.."Thirsting for your depths,"...Yeah this is hoooottttt!


  • Miss Apples
    January 5, 2007
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    You have some beautiful erotic word play in this piece.
    Thank you for sharing.


  • Heavenly Angel
    January 4, 2007
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    Very nice

    You are so right; when passion and lust mingle, powerful things happen
    Very nicely done; very passionate
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest