Face the needle without fear,
Pain threshold high, and image clear,
Permanent art its own reward,
Artists wielding ink as sword...
- © Foxlette 2006
Author notes
I was rather excited over getting my next tattoo!
Comments and critiques always welcomed.
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Oh wow! What a elegent write! And I just -have- to comment on this background- its beyond lovely, as well! Anyways, this peice is definitly a superb pen. I know that many are afraid of short writes, but this is done with style and flair.
I came across this one after I put one of my own new writes under the `tattoo` category. I didnt even know there was one! I suppose we are just an elite group for now, eh?
Wonderful write, for sure!!
Burmina
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Thanks for the kind words. My poems drift from epic lengths, to short and sweet. I just liked this one the way it was. I do love the background too! I stumbled across it a long time ago, somewhere.
Yes, a very elite group! We make our own keywords. Hehe.
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haha i can understand that....although i have yet to get one...being under 18 is such a bore. This is beautiful! i love your rhyme and flow. you got it all said and done within a 4 line stanza! wonderful! short and sweet sometimes is the best way to go! i love this one!
~Sorrow~
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