Sensible, logical - what do you mean?
I dont speak that launguage,
I dont understand,
For i, myself am an emotional creature,
I laugh, i cry, (often the latter)
But with Joy in my heart and a smile on my face,
An uplifting comment from a beautiful friend
I can live.
I can live.
I will live my life of praise.
Please tell me what you think
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Cool
Wowww.......this is a great write.I just love the way this poem's written.This poem rocks.Keep writing.
God Bless You
Josh
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now that is kool. That is a very wise (and -lmao- sensible) statement. I love how you wrote that. it was short sharp personal and I absolutely love the power in the statement "I CAN LIVE" lol you could write a sermon on that he he he awesome job ma frend
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good job with this piece!!! Living life the way everyone should!!
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Very Nice!
Hi daughter, this is a very good poem. You express yourself very well for being such a short piece. It's amazing how a kind word from a friend can change your whole outlook on things. Keep up with the great writes and God Bless, AP Dad.
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Beautiful
This is beautiful. I loved the way that you started out, and I loved the ending. Alot of people write their feelings, but they do not express themselves. You have managed that. Wonderful write.
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