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Say So

I'm sorry
This is a new year
It has started anew
I guess a new leaf in a book
Say so

So last year I was stupid
But I paid for all those wrongs
I lost a friend
But I plan to make ten more
Say so

I plan to be happy this year
To brush the weight away
I will have feather light shoulders
And I will do what I have to do
Say so


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  • Black Mamba
    January 2, 2007

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    Hmm, I agree with Mon...Which friend indeed. Happiness is fantabulous! but it seems we all must be careful what we do when in search for it. Greatly written, as always ^.^


  • Black Panic
    January 2, 2007
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    Interestings. Which friend did you lose? Hmmmm
    My thoughts are for you to be happy but don't do anything silly trying to get happy, yea? I liked this poem, 'was kinda different and the 'say so' repitition was clever.
    Happy '07... wow
    -Mon xo