Snowflakes fall and cover the ground
The graveyard is silent, noone is around
You search for the one, the grave of your friend
You finally find it hidden at the end.
You kneel down and brush off the snow
There I was, your friend, buried deep down below
You screamed out loud, "You were too young to die!
You were only fifteen when you committed suicide."
I spoke a lot of death, how peaceful it would be to die
Noone knew I meant it, I longed it so much I tried
One night when I was alone I decided to end my pain
I took some pills, went to sleep, never to wake again.
It's not your fault I chose my fate out of a hat
I made the decision, you'll have to accept that
You place a red rose on my grave, doing so with great care
Hoping I'll see it from wherever I am out there.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I want to cry!
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This is bloody amazing I really got hooked on every line. You write well and i shall enjoy reading more of your words. Thankyou for sharing this.
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painful
Sarah my princess, I can feel the depth of pain here baby. You wrote this beautifully my love. It flows really fucking well. I am so glad its just a "what might have been" kinda poem. I couldn't live without you.
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SAD
I understand the emotion so so well. Been down that road myself many many times.
Well done the verses flow beautifully and take the reader with you in your despair
Keep writing its a great way to get rid of pent up emotions and you do it so well
lisa
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