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[life]

Life
Age
Fucking litters the brain.
Yet we are born to it.
New vacancies for this social trash.
And like fish have gills,
We have evolved.
Learnt day by day
To breathe the decay - of our own minds.

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  • ChildeOfChaos
    January 1, 2007

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    Very powerful piece despite how short it is. You definately manage to get your point across. Nice work.

  • Tweedle Dee
    January 1, 2007

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    Mn your powerful and strong. Great job, man expressions make this world a bit better.

    COOL POEM EVEN IF YOUR MAD

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  • Violet Moodswing gold member
    January 1, 2007
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This is short but it has definatel Wow factor. It is pointed and direct and leaves me with things to think about as I finish it. I always like when that happens.

    Keep writing and welcome to the site