Your eyes said it all as i entered
The cool water surrounding you not able to calm such heat
And from fifteen feet away i can feel it
Burning in you
Burning in me
I look away
Quickly
Try to save face
Stay in character
They're all gonna see it
How could you not
But yet they remain oblivious
I bite my lip and close my eyes
As i turn from the others
Pray to god i'm not thinking aloud
I give it a moment
Or two
As long as i can stand
Before i kneel by the pool
Smiling
"Hey stranger.
How you been?"
You look at me again with those eyes
Sodden hair framing your sculpted face
As if to say
You know exactly how i've been you we're there
"I'm ok"
My heart leaps out my chest
"Hang on.. I"m coming... in"
A minute later i'm changed and i dive in beside you
Coming up from the water I meet you face to face
Both of us breathing long and deep
And still i cannot kiss you
But this water can conceal a multitude of sins
I lead you deeper
Down the yard
Away from the noise of the crowd
Take my drink in one hand
As the other strokes your side
And they could read volumes from our eyes
If they would care to look
You tread water as i slide the bottoms of your bikini
Slowly
Down
And tuck them into my own
"I'm gonna fuck you
Right here
In plain view of all of them"
I part your soft sweet lips with my fingers
And even underwater i can feel your juices
Smile
We're just friends remember
My finger rolls over your swollen eager clit
I feel you enclose me as i slide inside
I take your own hand and replace mine
Now busy driving into you
Faster
Harder
My fingers inside
Be quiet
I put your head on my shoulder
You bite hard into my neck
"Is she okay?" someone asks
"She's fine
A little drunk"
I drive my fingers in deeper
As you strain not to ride
And i feel it all building
Inches inside
Your moans almost silent
Almost - i wait
Not a second too soon
Or a second too late
"You ready baby?"
"uh huh... oh god please!"
"Ok. When i say so you can let it go"
"You ready?"
"uh huh"
"You ready?"
"YES"
"Now!"
A few seconds later
As she lost all control
I took her under the water so no one would know
And i finally kissed her
Just after she came
Twirling under the water
In a tender embrace
We came to the surface
All giggles and smiles
And nobody noticed
I fucked her that night.
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- Erotically Exotic by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended January 9, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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love it
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i cannot count how many times i have red this poem throughout this past year...it is amazing and its just perfect i love love love it...amazing job truly unforgetable
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Omfg...Kry..ahhhh....I have to take a cold shower now...lol...s'awesome damit


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Well...
This brings back, oh never mind.
Nice writing. Hot. Just gotta love it in the water... so many possibilitis
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
Dega Vu
Ahhh, to be that young again. Unsure, yet something beyond our control compells us
and it's a darned good thing or the human race would die out in the next generation
I ADORE making love in the water, you could do so many naughty things and not get caught
Hypnotic like quality to reading this, clear, yet subtly told. Kudos to you!

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VERY NICE! I loved this its sensual yet not blatenly grotesk in language. The whole time you are wondering if your gona get cought so it kind of builds suspence wich is always nice in a poem. Great work
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Johnathan
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