I feel so dark, disorientated,
Like I've lost my cool.
I see the world around me,
Dishevelled and a mess,
I see them yelling, screaming.
I cant keep my cool.
I hear them sobbing,
cry out to thier Lord.
One entity, one body,
To rule over them all.
I cannot keep my cool.
I see the tears run down the face.
I see the cold heart beat.
I see the blood run through the viens,
And out onto the street.
I turn and walk away,
Not looking back at what I've done,
Ha Ha, now you see,
I just lost my cool
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like this poem. i like how you kept saying "i cannot keep my cool" and then the last line to bring it all together with "i just lost my cool" i thought this was pretty well done. keep up the good work
Jonny
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