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Words, They're only words
Emotions set as music and tone
Why is it that
People's feelings get torn?

People's feelings get torn
Because of how words are said
Because of the emotion set behind them
and the knowledge in your head

This knowledge in your head
Telling you the situation
That these words relate to
As these words spill out
Be careful not to misplace them
Because you can tear someone apart

They're only simple words
But said with the wrong emotion and tone
Is like a movie with a funeral
but with the wrong background music.

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i cant write anything useful or worth meaning..but i keep writing hoping something good comes out sooner or later

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  • Dygurl
    January 9, 2007
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    very very true. i like this bc it is real, it is a spill of random thought that we think but never say. words have SUCH an impact on people in this life, and if some realized this there would be a great shift in the mood of life. nice work here.

  • CrazyBeyond
    January 8, 2007
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    i think this might actually be one of my favorites..i really like the lines "Be careful not to misplace,mis-word them, Because you can tear someone apart" its definatly true...good work love

    Renee