Caged inside this prison,
Locked inside my mind.
A noose prisicly looped around my neck,
As the torment starts to bind.
The voices echo throughout me,
And I'm deafened by the sound.
They dig a grave deep for me,
And place me in the ground.
Ashes to ashes and dust to dusk, they read,
Shedding the tears of false hope and broken smiles.
All the torture they've given on to me,
The torment they placed before me eyes.
They smile and throw a rose upon my cofin,
A rose stained in relentless abuse.
A symbole of pain and darkness,
And of the life I survived through.
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Not only is the background breathtaking, you have a piece to match it. Wonderfully written. Usually rhyme is forced and sounds terrible..but I do believe you've done so quite well.
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pixie -
How pleasantly dreary. I do enjoy the rhyme also, I dislike it often when people don't rhyme.
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Very deep it's kind of like a quote I saw Here it is "Have you ever wanted to die but still be alive for your funeral just to see who would come, to see who would cry........ Very moving piece
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Wow
This is a wonderful and touching peice. It is so short but yet it is right to the point. What sad imagery I seen while reading your words. Once again wonderful poem I am truely a fan of your work. I also love your background and the picture at the top. Very suiting.
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I loved your poem...si dark and sad it was really good and touching. I cant wait to read some more
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Ashley -
FANTASTIC
wow tasha this was great... So much emotion in this piece it tears me away.... I was addicted to this... i didnt want it to end... great job and keep on writing... Have fun at the concet tomorrow eh
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Very dark yet beautifull. Great job.
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Whoa...that's kinda heavy for this hour of the night. It related to alot of the stuff I've been dealing with, with people around me. Good job, I do hope this is just artistic expression and not a personal matter, but if it is take hope that you aren't alone.
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