Why is a image Important to you?
Why don't they see the beauty and youth?
Why are there so many crying in pain
because we can't accept them for having different faith?
What does it matter what I wear?
or if I stand in view, bare?
Don't you remember?
Beauties skin deep
Why not take the time to see the inner me?
Does it scare you I'm different from you?
Does it make you angry I can smile through and through?
Does it really matter what I say?
for you seem to judge me anyway.
Am I scary?
the unknown
A different creature
with a soul
Am I forbidden
from your world?
Do we unite?
or stand alone?
Author notes
Look deeper into a person not everything is black and white nor is everything about sight. Close you eyes in a conversation see if you care more? or less?
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting read hun, nice flow x
Glad you're still writing such vital and vibrant stuff.
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heyaa,, x
this is verryy gurd..
ant bin on a in ages so need 2 catch up wi ma applause n stuff lol.. x
fink i commentd on this 1 b4 but i just luv it lol...x...
ope youu ryt sum more lyk this lol cz i luv readin um lol.. x
luv youu .. megan.. x -
Great poem
I really liked this it really echoes my views, great work! Im glad to see you havent lost your talent!!
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heyyaaa x
yh i agree wiv them lot 2...
i fink that this poem is really something, it makes you think about the different things in life..
well done ..xx]
and it is a really good peice because you wrote it hehe luv ya xx -
i loved this! I totally beleive in the hypocrisy of being told not to judge a book by it's cover, while all the while human instinct tells us to do just that!
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exploring bigoty and ignorance here becky. well done and thought provoking love it xxpp
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Thank you this poem means a lot to me so I'm pleased you liked
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Really enjoyed reading this poem. I do believe in what you say, and it frustrates me that there is a pre-determined stereotype people have just dependent on what you look like. I thought you described this very well and in great depth without dragging the subject on.
I don't know if you noticed however that there appears to be a typo in the first line. I'm guessing you meant to write 'Why is an image important to you?' rather than 'Why is an imagine Important to you?' -
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thank you I have corrected that typo. Thanks for your comments they mean a lot. It is very frustrating how an image changes so many things.
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