The warmth of your smooth shoulder
eyes staring, searching almost
the darkness can't conceal
the way you always bite your lip
The blanketing fuzz of the cold black
can't shake the novelty
of being here, an invader in your habitat
"Do you have to watch me when I sleep?"
A contest entry
- Oh the joys of love by Edwards Bella.
450 points, ended August 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Relationships of all Types by RockChick.
600 points, ended October 2, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Intimacy by princess-bubblegum.
300 points, ended September 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ever felt that?
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
It took me a few moments to come to when reading this, and i think it is a splendid write! Well done and thanks for entering! Good luck!
-
Short and sweet, I loved it.
It seems to refer to a specific time in the course of a relationship, which one either creepy, or extremely poetic partner, a moment not enough of us have felt, because there's nothing more beautiful than how someone looks in the intimacy, and safety of their own dreams.
Bravo. -
lovely poem
good luck in my contest.
xo
kandy -
If only it was longer so I could read on!!!!! I absolutely loved it!!
-
Awww lol this made me actually laugh I don't know if that if it was suppose to it seems really personal tho but it still made me laugh.
Great job,
Kamala Kari -
-
lol
yeah it made me laugh, sometimes you just have to when it gets all mushy!
-
-
i really like this. I don't know why ha, i think it's because i can relate. simple bet strong. loved it.
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
